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MLP FiM: The secret Life of Carrottop (Part 1) by PerfectBlue97 MLP FiM: The secret Life of Carrottop (Part 1) by PerfectBlue97
MLP: FiM - The Secret Life of Carrot Top (Part 1)

Part 2: perfectblue97.deviantart.com/a…

I haven't done a multi-part comic for a while, so here goes. There are going to be 5-6 pages in this one. This is an unofficial sequal to an earlier comic that I made (perfectblue97.deviantart.com/a….

I wanted to do a comic with no actual dialogue, and this is what I came up with. Originally, this story was going to be about Derpy, but I totally re-wrote it and changed the ending to make it about Carrot Top.

I created most of the content in Inkscape, and then exported it to Photoshop to put it together.

I made an extra effort to use my own vectors for this comic, particularly when it came to backgrounds. Up until now, I've been copy/pasting other people's vecotrs in. This time I've done all of my own backgrounds and my own ponies. OK  some parts are obviously copied from the show (The whole of Frame 9, for example, is copied from the show). But at least I copied it myself rather than using somebody else's vectors.

The main logo was drawn by Greseres (greseres.deviantart.com/art/ML…. The font is Celestia Redux (mattyhex.deviantart.com/art/Ce…. Carrot Top's Cutie Mark is Carrot Top Cutie Mark by ArcticKiwi (browse.deviantart.com/art/Carr…. I used VoaxmasterSpydre's Whhaaaaa?! (voaxmasterspydre.deviantart.co… as a base for frame 14. Though I couldn't get the expression quite right.

The story is quite simple. Carrot Top is throwing up in the morning (Frame 1 to Frame 4), is putting on weight (Frame 5 to Frame 6) and is experiencing weird food cravings (Frame 7 to Frame 8). In Frame 10, Nurse Readheart gives her the good news. She's with Foal. She doesn't take it so well, and neither does her Colt Friend Caramel.
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:iconsnowflakethepony337:
SnowflakeThePony337 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2015  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
what i got from this is that she is pregnant because of Caramel (however you spell his name)
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:iconperfectblue97:
PerfectBlue97 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Bingo.
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GriffyMLPFIMClaw13 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Aw poir Carrott Top! D:
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:iconthescribbleartcreeps:
TheScribbleArtCreeps Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2014  Student Artist
seriously? SHE BLINKS*points to left*THEN SHE CRIES*points to right*WTF!
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:iconperfectblue97:
PerfectBlue97 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Haven't you ever seen those old Loony Tunes shorts where a character stands there in stunned silence, and blinks a couple of times?
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TheScribbleArtCreeps Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2014  Student Artist
oh yeah i remember that NAH IM NOT 1990's IM JUST A 8 YEAR OLD GIRL JUST BORN ON 2006!
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PerfectBlue97 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well, a lot of the good ones were even earlier than that. Like the Road Runner cartoons. They were made long before I was born but I used ot watch reruns on a Saturday morning.
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TheScribbleArtCreeps Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2014  Student Artist
:/ oh mkay
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Star-the-alicorn Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
XD lol kwl
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NAH223445566 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014
Rarity?
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:iconperfectblue97:
PerfectBlue97 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Rarity is saying that she's gained weight.
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:iconcentaur71:
Centaur71 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2014
Why is Caramel being a dickless?
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:icondaiguard78:
DaiGuard78 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014
Applejack, get the shotgun!
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:iconmonterrang:
monterrang Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Student General Artist
why carrot top blinks sometimes?
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:iconperfectblue97:
PerfectBlue97 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You know ... like on the old Luna Tunes cartoons.

It signifies a moments of quiet realization before a dramatic event.

Daffy Duck pushes an anvil off of a cliff on to Bugs Bunny, but it hits a trampoline and bounces back up.

Just before the anvil hits him, Daffy Duck looks directly at the audience with his eyes open wide, he blinks twice and holds up a sign saying "Ouch", and then the anvil hits him.
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DangMarzia Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014  Student Digital Artist
:la:
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Huntsman-Oz Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013
I'm not a brony, but as a great father I watch this show with my daughters, so I get this comic beautifully. I love how it is done, and I am hoping to see more of it.
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DragonTurtle2 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2013
For the 5th and 6th panels, you didn't need the check and X signs.  Without them, I'd have just interpreted the conversation as "The dress would be ready on this date with a normal figure," and then "The dress will be ready on a later date due to your wider figure."  Putting the Red X creates the effect of a double negative.
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PerfectBlue97 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I was more going for "your measurements were X then, but are Y Now".

The Tick was to show that she matched them in frame 5 but not in frame 6.

It's interesting to see how different people see the symbols. I think that the Fish muffins on the first page are probably the most obvious.
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DragonTurtle2 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2013
Your link to the unofficial Part 1 is 404.  A shame, I really want to read it.
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:iconperfectblue97:
PerfectBlue97 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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BADASSassin Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013
CARAMEL, YOU GET YOUR ASS BACK HERE AND MARRY HER.
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:iconperfectblue97:
PerfectBlue97 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Would somepony who runs out on a pregnant filly really make a good husband?

He seems like a bit of a jerk to me.
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BADASSassin Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013
She's a full grown mare, not a filly. But obviously she thought he was a good enough dude to have sex with him, and even let him (you know what) in her, so...
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Persona22 Featured By Owner May 18, 2014
Those actions and assumptions still do not mean Caramel would make a great father and/or husband. It just proves he made a good one night stand.
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BADASSassin Featured By Owner May 19, 2014
Good point. But she's asking him in the comic.
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raggyrabbit94 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist

aww, poor Carrot top, don't cry :iconcarrottopplz:

Caramel you big jerk. come back here and make an honest mare of her!

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malis22 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013
*grabs caramel* *speaks in demon voice* you mother bucker thats not how you treat a mare thats carring your child
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:iconraggyrabbit94:
raggyrabbit94 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist

I'll handcuff him to Carrottop so he doesn't run away!

 

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:iconmalis22:
malis22 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2013
frost: ill get some one to perform the ceremony how about my son discord
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:iconportalseeker:
PORTALSEEKER Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
hes gettin away, quick use the tazer!!!
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:iconraggyrabbit94:
raggyrabbit94 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I got a tazer! Emote: Voldemort Lightning :iconcaramelponyplz:
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:iconmalis22:
malis22 Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2013
frost: those never work try this *strikes caramel with lightning* there that should keep him unconscious 
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:icontanaka-sentaro:
Tanaka-Sentaro Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Should we...execute him? Or cut off his...
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valleyviolet Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013  Hobbyist
Caramel, you jerk!
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:iconthe1cutemetalchick:
the1cutemetalchick Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
bawwww poor carrot top xD <3
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:iconhokutoulrik:
HokutoUlrik Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Poor Carrot Top! Someone needs a gelding.
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:iconfoolyguy:
foolyguy Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Aw, this is pretty sad.
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:iconmalis22:
malis22 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013
that guys a jerk
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karkovice1 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013

Uh oh. Looks like Caramel's gonna become a "deadbeat dad". So tragic! :(

 

And...FISH MUFFINS??? That's enough to make ME puke, and I don't get morning sickness! :P

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darkoak213 Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
peut-être qu'il n'est pas le père et qu'elle voulait simplement le marié pour le petit qui s'en vien?
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karkovice1 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013
Peut-être... on le saura pour sûr dans un autre chapitre... si la bande dessinée va continuer...
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darkoak213 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
peut-être:)
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matty4z Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013
poor carrot top..pffft but cant help but laugh? lol XD
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:iconrecoyote:
RECoyote Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013
OK pulls out Shotgun, Come on, well make him make it right.
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:iconringsandamiss007:
ringsandamiss007 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013
She wants to be filled with stallion seed and lots of it.
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Tearahk Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
*reads description*... OH! Now I get it. XD
Wow, Caramel better step up.
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:iconrubyoftrinity:
RubyOfTrinity Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013
He darned better step up and take Responsibility in one way or another.  >:P
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edwinflores428 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013
Caramel....why you be a dick to Carrot Top? Not cool dude...
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:iconperfectblue97:
PerfectBlue97 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It wold be an awful short comic if he did.
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