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MLP: FIM - Without Magic - Part 9 by PerfectBlue97 MLP: FIM - Without Magic - Part 9 by PerfectBlue97
After much promising, I've managed to complete the Applejack story arc, and I've moved on to fluttershy

Yet another page that took a lot longer than I expected as I had other things on, and because I was having difficulty concentrating on it. Still, it's done now.

I've actually managed to get Twilight's hood down, for once, and I've drawn her in the cloak from the front. I wasn't initially planning on doing either. I'm not particularly good at drawing (I know, since I'm drawing a comic, being good at drawing would help somewhat), so it was something new.

I also sneaked Scootaloo in on this page.

Part 1: [link]
Part 2: [link]
Part 3: [link]
Part 4: [link]
Part 5: [link]
Part 6: [link]
Part 7: [link]
Part 8: [link]

This page was created in Inkscape and Photoshop.

All of the backgrounds are modified versions of ZuTheSkunk's MLP Resource: Bgr 001 (generic background) (zutheskunk.deviantart.com/art/MLP-Resource-Bgr-001-generic-background-256276354). I basically rearanged the trees and clouds, and added in some mountains, to better suit my layout. I also used my own shading for the ground so that it matches the ground in my other pages.

Derpy from Frame 1 was drawn by SierraEx ([link])

Cloud chaser from Frame 2 was drawn by 90Sigma ([link])

I used Kait-the-Lynxx's Fluttershy Vector ([link]) in frame 4 and arcticjuniper's Fluttergasp ([link]) as a template for Fluttershy in Frame 7. I did the same with Kopachris's MtBPW Concerned Fluttershy ([link]) in frame 10

I created my own vector using them as a base for the pose andor expression. The rest of the vectors was are modified versions of my Twilight Sparkle, Rainbow Dash and Applejack vectors from previous pages.

I used Yanoda's Curious Fluttershy 2 ([link]) as a base Fluttershy's mane in the frames where she is facing forwards (Mostly just the maneline).

The pose in Frame 16 is based on one in DaringDashie' Dragon Trouble ([link]), but with a different body.

Flutershy's Cutie Mark is by Grendopony [link]

Most of the images of Twilight Sparkle are modified versions of vectors created for the previous pages. Credit is the same.

I'm not sure which images I used as a base for Scootaloo. Some are a modified version of AppleBloom from my previous pages with Scootaloo's eyes and hair.
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:iconpegasister89123:
pegasister89123 Featured By Owner May 16, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
TWILIGHT HOW COULD DO THIS TO MY FAVORITE CHARACTERS!!
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:iconperfectblue97:
PerfectBlue97 Featured By Owner May 17, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Scootaloo?
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:iconcuchulin:
Cuchulin Featured By Owner May 7, 2015
LOL!
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:iconpixelblujay:
PixelBlujay Featured By Owner May 7, 2015  New Deviant
DERPY!CLOUDCHASER!
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:icondefendradoesgamez:
DefendraDoesGamez Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2015  Student
Twilight (Cute pout) Plz S-Sorry fluttershy and scootaloo... I forgot about how you can't fly...
Fluttershy (sad) plz I-Its ok right scoots

Scootaloo (Aw c'mon) Plz Yea I guess...


Derpy Clapping Pony Icon RANDOM MUFFINS*
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:iconperfectblue97:
PerfectBlue97 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yay Muffins.
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:iconwyote:
Wyote Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2015
Wow, at this rate Twilight's new cutie mark is going to be tears with how much crying there's been.
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:iconwireball:
Wireball Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2015
I like the, "Years of repressed Trauma come to the surface." banner - it kind of reminds me of the subtitles in old silent movies.  In a good way :)

Part 10:
MLP: FiM - Without Magic - Part 10 by PerfectBlue97
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:iconmaldrete:
Maldrete Featured By Owner Edited Mar 14, 2015
I have to admit, excellent writing with Twilight accidentally offending yet another group in a believable, non-forced way.
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:iconflutter-butter55678:
flutter-butter55678 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2015  New Deviant
TWILIGHT! nice comic. cold....
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:iconglitch10:
Glitch10 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2015
Twilight...not a good place to go. you know they both aren't exactly the best flyers!
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:iconravenpuff:
Ravenpuff Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2015
Wow, Twilight really is stuffing her hoof into her mouth today.
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:iconluvluvdarkness:
LuvLuvDarkness Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, Twilight.
Just... wow.
(This was great. Loved it :)
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:icondoubleblaze:
DoubleBlaze Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2014
Trixie Sees Too Roll Icon  i feel bad for laughing at fluttershy and scootaloo...

still...
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:iconcrucifythewolf:
CrucifyTheWolf Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
See? This is why everyone should shut up with the Scootachicken jokes, they're not that funny anymore.
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:iconmelodymalone123:
melodymalone123 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
They weren't funny in the first place, in my opinion.
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:iconcrucifythewolf:
CrucifyTheWolf Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
They had some taste when it started off. Now it's just uncomfortable following Flight to the Finish. I remember posting my thoughts on this on derpibooru, all I had were assholes going "OH YOU CAN'T TAKE A JOKE".
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:iconmelodymalone123:
melodymalone123 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Aah, yeah. Some bronies/pegasisters have no rigt to be them. :(
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:iconcrucifythewolf:
CrucifyTheWolf Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes -_-..
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:iconmelodymalone123:
melodymalone123 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yep. :|
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:iconmrmeow20:
MrMeow20 Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2014
haha, Dodo Chicken :P
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:icontabrislockhart:
TabrisLockhart Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2014
Okay, bad example
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:icondungeonbrony:
DungeonBrony Featured By Owner Edited Oct 14, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Nice timing in the last four panels :) built up the tension well
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:iconwubtime123:
WUBTIME123 Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
i thaught scottaloo was gonna explode after that story
thanks a lot twilight you made fluttershy cry
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:iconspkon107:
SPkon107 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2014  Student Artisan Crafter
Nice going you idiot
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:iconwolfpaws72:
wolfpaws72 Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2014
TWILIGHT! WHY!?!?Facepalm 
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:iconelirathedinosaur:
EliratheDinosaur Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Ahhah aheh. Well done Twi'.
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:iconcolonelbsacquet:
ColonelBSacquet Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2014
Bad choice of expression, Twi'. :-S
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:iconbecause-im-pink:
Because-Im-Pink Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Smart move egghead.
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:iconbadwolf1000:
BadWolf1000 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Twilight I know you are stupid but I didn;t know you were that stupid.
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:iconevabronyloveart:
EvaBronyLoveArt Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
TWILIGHTTTTTTTTTTTT
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:icontwylite-sparkle:
Twylite-Sparkle Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014
Celeez, Twilight!
The times when adorkableness doesn't work in your favor...
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:iconsnoopystallion:
SnoopyStallion Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
nice comic ^^

but i miss the links to the next pages on several episodes. that's kinda annoying.
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:iconsilky-cotton:
Silky-Cotton Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
uh
does Twilight's cloak really make her so hard to discern her appearance
like she has the same lavender cloak and purple eyes and HER TAIL    IT'S OBVIOUSLY HER TAIL    AND IT SHOWS THE COLORS OF HER HAIR (COLORS THAT ONLY SHE HAS)    AND THAT STAR PATTERN
"UM HAVE WE MET" ???? seriously
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:icon1cosmiconsciousness:
1cosmiconsciousness Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014
Made both Fluttershy and Scootaloo cry with one sentence. Impressive, and a bit insensitive.
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:icondrsdavidsoft:
DRSDavidSoft Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Next Part: fav.me/d5xlblg
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:icondarrindog:
Darrindog Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014
XD :squee: 
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:iconponypics98:
ponypics98 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
TWILIGHT OFFENSIVENESS!XDXD 
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:iconzdforrest:
ZDForrest Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2014  Student Filmographer
Oops! 
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:iconellycooarts:
EllyCooArts Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Twilight, Twilight, Twilight... WHAT WAS THAT FOR???
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:icondetah-ramet:
Detah-Ramet Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014
Fluttershy's sense of identity comes almost purely from the animals that she helps and cares for. While she does have a great deal of insecurity about flight, I'm pretty sure that she would understand where Twilight was coming from with that statement and at more would be slightly bummed, but otherwise shrug off that statement. Hell, the years of insecurity only really manifest for her in the form of performance anxiety.

Scoots would more than likely just give Twilight a dirty look, considering the fact that she can barely fly. Hell, with her, she only really let her insecurities manifest when it was put in place by Diamond Tiara, most likely around not being good enough for Dash, which happened post Twilight's inauguration.
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:iconperfectblue97:
PerfectBlue97 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'd just watched Hurricane Fluttershy.
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:icondetah-ramet:
Detah-Ramet Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014
...considering this is post changeling cannon, shouldn't she be over that bit of self-conciousness for the most part?
That was kinda the point of Fluttershy, or so i though.
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:iconperfectblue97:
PerfectBlue97 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I wrote this before I'd seen season 2.
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:icondetah-ramet:
Detah-Ramet Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2014
fair enough
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:iconfotland42:
fotland42 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2014
Nice going, Twilight. You're so great at talking to ponies today. Although, really, I doubt those words would have brought up trauma for 'Shy. She's a pegasus who doesn't like to fly and who has social anxiety; a casual reference to an inability to fly is not going to bring her back to the times she was bullied. Only Scoots should be crying.

Is Derpy in the outhouse meant to represent where AJ told her to put her head as penance for being a racist idiot? That's rather insulting to Derpy, don't you think?

Incidentally, are Derpy and Cloudchaser going to feature at all in this segment? Their appearance in the first two panels did not seem random, and I was kind of expecting them to collide by the end of this comic.

Link. Again.
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:iconperfectblue97:
PerfectBlue97 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Derpy in the outhouse was purely a toilet humor gag. I think that I'd just heard a story on the news about a real life person getting stuck in a toilet.

The ponies in the background are more or less random.
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NellzDaBlackKing Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2014
Uhhhhh that didn't come out right...
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:iconsturmlion1:
Sturmlion1 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2014
Grow up.
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:iconmiyunea:
Miyunea Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2014
Meant ones
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